YES! Such a vibe. Just right. The the devotion to status quo with the hint at tensions, the angst at adding another, and the final self perception, what do we look like from the outside? That is deep. All so little and large, mundane and everything. Just right. I love the absolute real time telling. It is so familiar and also we can feel something looming. The red just at the edges. Wonderful!!
“My shoes are right there. Girl, can you breathe?”
favorite line.
I love the sharp flip from prose to dialogue, Cléo. It elegantly underscores the tension of that moment
YES! Such a vibe. Just right. The the devotion to status quo with the hint at tensions, the angst at adding another, and the final self perception, what do we look like from the outside? That is deep. All so little and large, mundane and everything. Just right. I love the absolute real time telling. It is so familiar and also we can feel something looming. The red just at the edges. Wonderful!!
justice for maggie she's the only real one ✊✊✊